Dream Deep

Just a few thoughts, Kristina: You may want to make sure you've revised your piece before posting it. Everyone will make a few mistakes here and there, let a typo ...

Gummy, you continually astonish me, and I mean that in every possible positive way. I may be slightly useless on this point for I have no suggestions, no ability here ...

Heya Till - the crit still on its way, I promise. I'll try to edit it in this evening, if I get half a chance. ^_^ Voila! Against all odds ...

I've not forgotten the crit, Shest, never fear. ^_~ Life seems to be getting in the way of my actually typing one up. I'm going to try to get it ...

This was great, Chairman - it's difficult to write an essay on writing and actually have it maintain a light-hearted air without becoming bogged down in a mess of notes ...

Privyet, my fine Imp! Last night I read this over and took some notes in the margins: it gave me wonderful first impression, Imp, you've got an amazingly unique writing ...

Nice, Pisces, for your first post on the site. And on that note, welcome. ^_^ I very much hope you enjoy your time here. And now onto the poem... This ...

C'est moi! ... and a crit. ^_~ This, like 'Gypsie Eyes' and 'In Thrall', has a very affecting writing style - it pulls you along without stopping. You sit down ...

The Imp must have posted this while I was away, I didn't get the chance to look at it before. ^_~ So here I am, pressed for time but glad ...

*was similiarly shanghaied* ... a while ago, and now that I've returned from exile, I very much look forward to critting this. ^_~ I've printed it out and will read ...

Alas - DD has wandered about the forums and found her way to Secrets. ^_~ I'm going to start back at Chapter One, if you don't mind, and work my ...

... And I'm back for more. Looks like you won't have to come poke me after all? And then it's on to Misty's story and Till's, and I pray to ...

I like it very much. (And no, not just because you're Wiggy.) ^_^ Some suggestions, here: Thousand of butterflies swirl like a milkmaid churning butter. [It's a very nice image ...

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. ... In a very heart-wrending, crushing way, of course. ^_~ It's the simplicity that gets to you. You make no deep philosophical point. You attempt no cheap ...

Yes, I have to agree with Trident on that point. The Holocaust is one of those terrible, unfathomable things that humanity subjected itself to - it almost makes you sick ...